Poetry Friday – A Rose

clipart-rose-Flower5 (1)Happy Friday once again! Hope you are all doing well. Happy belated Mother’s Day to all the mommies out there. Hope you had a great one. It’s poetry time again this week. ‘A Rose’ is the poem I am sharing this week. Flowers do remind me of Mother’s Day, so you could say I was inspired to post this one because of that; however, the poem itself doesn’t have much to do with Mom. Well unless you have feelings of suffocation and betrayal in your relationship than hey this is one you might relate to. Ha, ha!

This poem was one I wrote some time ago, but it is freshly edited. Whenever I edit an old poem, I am always amazed how much my writing style changes over the years. I don’t get as much time as I used to write poetry, but still my vocabulary, ideas and inspiration changes greatly. I used to focus so much on writing ‘poetically’ that I didn’t spend enough time making sure my imagery made sense and came across  clearly in my poem. As such some of my ideas were muddled and confusing. I hope that isn’t the case in this one that I am about to share with you. Please enjoy! I’d love to hear your thoughts if you’re willing to share them with me. Happy weekend!

❤ Melissa

 


 

A Rose

If you walked a hundred days
knowing the truth,
could you remain in one with a lie?
Would you be able to surrender
and succumb to save me?
If I clung to the highest cliff
by my last consequence,
would you leave me hanging
giving me one last explanation?

I am the rose frozen in winter
yearning for my growth,
to no longer hide,
I, surrounded by silvery snow,
waiting for the sun to guide me
wash me over
melt away.

I cannot exist
in this harsh environment
in blizzard haze.
My limbs frozen in ice.
I grasp the entrapment,
but do not know yet why,
I have fallen frozen so frequent.

A rose frozen
in the betrayal of her surroundings
never will be freed.


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